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Brendan's avatar

The problem with pyramids is that they can only summit, permanence become eternal dust. Pray for the grace of noctal winds, I suppose. Singing back.

Namratha Varadharajan's avatar

Are we evolving in the wrong direction? Have we gotten used to the darkness?

Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Or we lost the ability to see darkness because the light shows us what we want to see… the price of evolution….?

Vidya Shankar's avatar

Rajani, this poem may have various interpretations, but for me, it resonates with my journey with grief.

But there remains

the issue with light:

what it was before

we could see,

what was lost,

and what we should do now

with the darkness

that still

stubbornly

remains?

Hard-hitting.

Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thank you for reading, Vidya… poetry brings us back to ourselves- with new words.

Sherry Marr's avatar

What to do with this darkness indeed, and the lack of character some have to oppose it. Sigh. The wildfires rage, new pipelines get approved..........the world I love, burning itself up.

Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

It is quite unbelievable - the crazy fires and the crazy carbon-spewing wars…we seem to be ok with both.

Joe's avatar
Aug 8Edited

From a great height

the boisterous sun is shining

like the head of a family

from whom life must flow.

But we, who know

the blister of an afternoon

take pity on our fields

removing dirty sandals

tucking the sun into bed

and lull the child to sleep

with our singing.

Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

A beautiful image there, Joe. Thanks.

srinivasa rao Jayanthy's avatar

Evocative.

Sonia Dogra's avatar

Probably turn inwards? What other solution do we have. I love the analogy of the pyramid.