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Brendan's avatar

This is a ways down the road from memory - "I do with courage what I do with grief. /

Swipe left. Keep scrolling." Leave those children faded in the rear-view mirror. Honesty like this is so hard for poetry to bear, but it's our job to honestly apprize the burden.

Jacquelyn Cisper's avatar

"In an orange jacket,

Rachel facing

a moving bulldozer"

I remember this very well on a personal level. My brother was right there with her and was also partially buried in rubble but survived and was dug out by small boys, then he accompanied Rachel's body back to the US. I've tried to write about it a couple times but can't seem to get anything I'm happy with, maybe because I only heard it all secondhand while I was safely tucked up in an American college. Anyway, you wrote powerful poem. thanks

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