Sometimes it rains inside a poem. You can hear the drumbeat, see raindrops collect on leaf and asphalt and tile, feel wet fingers wrap around your soul or relive history as it floats above the words.
In his book, True Life, Adam Zagajewski (translated by Clare Cavanagh) writes an evocative rain poem. Rain in Lvov, starts with:
It falls on the Armenian cathedral and on the Uniate Church of Saint George. On the opera and on the black house. Hills vanish in the mist. and ends with this: Tram wheels screeched on their tight tracks. And all of us wept bypasssers and guests victors and vanquished.
A storm of visuals and emotions. But this poem was inspired by Rain in Krakow by Tadeusz Rozewicz. In the epigraph, Zagajewski quotes the second and third line of the first verse (the translation I have is by Bill Johnston):
rain falling on the Wawel dragon on the bones of giants on Kościuszko Mound on the Mickiewicz Monument on Podkowiński’s Frenzy on Mr. Dulski on the trumpeter from St. Mary’s tower Rozewicz closes with: goodnight living and dead poets goodnight poetry
Poetry begets poetry. In an endless spiral.
I don’t know how many poems this sequence of rain song has inspired. But I am compelled to add my own, even in a March that thinks it is May: hot, dry and without the faintest possibility of a shower.
Rain in Bangalore (after Rain in Lvov after Rain in Krakow) It falls on July’s rain. It falls on June’s rain. The monsoon in only half-done. Breath is a paper boat. Grey wells up from grey. Today’s rain falls on Thursday’s gulmohars that slide down decades-old bark onto yesterday’s grass. The sky of a billion years enters each drop. Somewhere, temple bells ring wet. Light leaves as if it was there. Clouds bend lower to pray. Under her umbrella, she gathers skirt and courage and faith and desperation to keep on walking. While the city gives up from its deluged womb, rats and snakes and traffic snarls: the red light like a bug smashed against the windshield bloodied and dripping. The rain, weapon. The rain, wound. He watches from a 12th floor window. What if the sun does not rise again? What if the moon has been snuffed out? What if this is the last deluge? What if there never was an ark? Chrome and glass mirror - chrome and glass mirror a heaven split again and again by lightning. Then it all dissolves and rushes down. Water tracking water. Into water.
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This is a wonderful meditation on rain and also of how poems and poets inspire each other. Your poem to rain and the poetry of rain is masterful.
Beauitiful! (And inspired a response, at my 'Enheduanna's Daughter' blog.)