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Rosemary Nissen-Wade's avatar

I like the way you are putting us in the context of larger Nature.

PresentWordTravels-by Sammi 静辰's avatar

Such a powerful, deeply awakened poem — illuminated by the light of a winter sun.

I was especially moved by the ending lines:

If you listen hard, in the quiet shade

of a March afternoon,

a native bird in the Okavango Delta,

foraging for insects, will perhaps,

for a moment,

absent-mindedly

start humming their song.

They linger beautifully — tender, attentive, and full of quiet hope.

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