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Neil Barker's avatar

I really like the vivid descriptions, Rajani - especially this line: "dawn percolating through her branches."

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thanks so much, Neil.

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

This comparison between woman and tree is beautiful, Rajani!

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thanks so much, Rea 🙏🙏

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Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

Lovely.

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thanks so much, Stephanie 🙏

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Greg Carman's avatar

The last stanza is gorgeous. Thank you, Rajani.

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thanks so much for reading, Greg. Glad that last part resonated.

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Kim M Russell's avatar

Beautiful, Rajani, and I love those van Gogh swirls.

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thank you, Kim 🙏🙏

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Marjorie Pezzoli's avatar

No wonder I love painting images of trees - Absolutely beautiful

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thanks so much, Marjorie!

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B S Freeman's avatar

Another very beautiful poem Rajani. I wonder how you can do it. It’s like having perfect pitch. So that I was reminded, how playing bowed instruments require this kind of ear. You bring it to poetry.

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thank you, Brad. That is so kind. Such a beautiful thing to say. Appreciate it very much. Am glad you liked the poem.

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Rosemary Nissen-Wade's avatar

Wonderful; a very satisfying read on many levels.

(Signed – A Lover of Trees)

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thanks so much, wrote it for last year’s Glopowrimo.

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Nazish Nasim's avatar

A strong woman is like a tree indeed 💪

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

How lovely!!

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thanks so much, Rebecca.

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Arti's avatar

In these uncertain times, this read like hope.

Loved the promise held in 'the shape of tomorrow'.

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Petru Viljoen's avatar

One is left wondering what she walked away from?

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Vinitha's avatar

Beautiful imagery! Lovely poem, Rajani.

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Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

Thanks so much, Vinitha.

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